Thanks for the feedback on the website, I will try to improve on the writing. I'm not really good at handwriting or speller, but I'll try to make it more readable for all the readers. I actually didn't think my drawings weren't proportional, but I'll accept that and fix the proportions as much as I can. I actually am not using a Chromebook and not using a mouse either. I am using my personal and a graphics tablet (look it up if you don't know what that is). At first in my other webcomic series (Aka The TazD Studios) I used mouse and Pixlet (a horrible cheap photoshop) but I convinced my parents to get one (aka the Personal Project help that one out). I know there was kinda a slow introduction, but trust me the rest of the story will have more plot. Just keep checking back! There has been a lot of trolling in the comments, though it wasn't you. This one kid is basically harassing me in the comments (the "tHiS iS rAcIsT" comment.) It wasn't being racist since pandas do come from China and it was basic character development. He now is continuing to make more comments like that that aren't helping me with my project. I am trying everything I can do to make this kid stop (I've told the principal and blocked him many times). I really appreciate what you said and I thank the feedback you gave for me. I took no offense in anything you said and will try my best to improve my work for the future of Story Mode. THANKS!!! ^w^