(Review at request) Why the NSFW tag? Is it the bra or the mech arms? As far as figures and poses go, that fall out of the bed looks a little awkward. In my experience it's good to study actual figures in various poses and actions to better understand how those events progress. Even look at your own drawings and see how you've positioned her in previous panels. If she's sitting on her bed like she is in the 7th panel, then then she wouldn't logically fall with her feet over the bed like she does in panel 8. Something to think about.
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