Static in the Air : Pages 10 & 11
Feb 07, 2025
YIPPEE! I'm finally getting to post this page of backgrounds. One huge goal of mine for this comic is to get a lot more comfortable with backgrounds and color, so trial by fire?
Also, if you're willing to give feedback, how do you all feel about the hazy and scratchy artistic styling of the flashbacks? Is it quickly recognizable as a flashback? My early readers said it was but I want to make sure from a wider audience as if it's not working I want to know for future flashback scenes to tackle them a bit differently. Thank you!
Strudel1000
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I think it would read more clearly as a flashback if (a) my phone’s screen was bigger so I could see the details better and (b) the characters were also drawn in a scratchy/hazy/less rendered style
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