Idea.... for the series.... What if I changed it to:
The Kingdoms of Dyron (Formally The Dark Queen)
The Curse of the Witch
The Princess of the North
The Child of Storms
The Assassin of Kilian ( Formerly The King's Assassin, will need to make some changes)
The Lady of Death (Formerly TKoD or Lady Death)
I have a prologue "The Twin Queen" that gives a bit of history.
Then I have chapter one, which is about a guy who gives his life to save his troops.
Then I have Chapter two that finally jumps into the story.
Would it be too much to put a chapter in after Chapter Two that talks about Rae's past as a child, or should I save that for later on in the book?
If you read Lady Death, I am thinking about moving the chapter about Rae after she first gets her magic and how her friend is no longer her friend because of it.
Hey there, just wanted to throw this out there: Once you have finished writing Lady Death and if you want an Editor for it, I’d be glad to do it for free. It’s a very well written story and I think it’d be fun for me to try and do. Even though I’m not a professional Editor, I think I’m a pretty good writer and know how to tell a good story. Anyway just wanted to offer. :)
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