Well!! I found this story tonight and I've read the lot in one sitting!!! I am a hard church, there is nothing wrong with either the story or the style.!!! Jake is a character I have begun to care about. Keep it up, I am in for the long haul here!!!
I am a straight guy, whatever that means today!!. I really care about your characters, especially Jake, who reminds me of me at that age. I knew where I was sexually, but being very shy, awkward, bloody awful at sports and, I thought not at all good looking! I had the same feelings about approaching girls as Jake has with boys. What I am trying to say, admittedly not very well!! is that I hope you think you are only writing for the gay community, 'cos, as far as I'm concerned, you are definitely not!!! I also hope that the college thing sorts itself out. I went through the same thing some forty odd years ago, yes I really am that old!!! No university for me!! My Dad, bless him, was mortified!! In retrospect, best thing that could have happened and my subsequent life has been damn good!! What I'm trying to say, again not so well!!, is stay calm and explore every possibility.
My writing is aimed at although not limited to straight women! Its good to hear that you're a reader 💜💜 I think we all go through that shy awkward phase 🤣🤣 And Universities have been a roller-coaster. Thank you soo much for your positive words 💕💕