The Loss of Zomaris
Jun 08, 2021
Zomaris, a well known, powerful figure in the Ara galaxy. Leader and king of the 4th Doxterian Empire, finds himself in the middle of the torn down capital city of the home-planet of his empire. After finding out his daughter, princess Zakone is responsible for the mass destruction of the city, and has gone rogue, he launches a hunt down for his daughter. Whoever finds and brings Zakone back home alive will recieve an amount of up to 14 thousand dexitee - The doxterian race's currency, one of the most valuable in the galaxy.
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Powerful beginning. The situation you've set up makes me wonder what could have gone so wrong and if Zakone is really guilty of this terrible crime. Your art is full of energy and your use of red as the only exception to greyscale is very effective.
I don't know if you want constructive criticism or not. I noticed a couple of usage errors, such as 'I and her', when it should have been 'She and I' and "at the hands of you' when it should be, 'at your hands'. Other than that, good job on the writing!
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