French is your first language right? Mind if I help you with some English errors?
Panel 1: "that" instead of "this"
Panel 2: "for" instead of "during"
Panel 3:
Bubble 1: "I'm pretty sure she never bathes." instead of "I'm pretty sure she never washes herself" (sounds more natural. If you want sarcasm: "I bet she's never taken a bath in her life!"
Bubble 2: "No kidding. I sit next to her in math. What a pain."
Bubble 3: "Sucks for you."
Bubble 5: "She's only wearing black."
Bubble 7: No need for the word "course".
Bubble 8: "You know what they say, right? In Science, people make cardboard boxes, in Social Sciences, people sell them, and in Lit, people sleep in them!"
Bubble 9: "You're such a dumbass."
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