a young police woman who receive a helper come from a person with title criminal lord who live a long time ago. is this person genuine helping the girl or he got agenda of hes own.
I like it it seems you plot pace is a little fast tho. try to slow it down so important details stick out and readers arnt hit with a huger wall of info.
a young police woman suddenly found herself a helper came a form of a Criminal Lord who happen to live a long time ago. is he genuine in helping the girl or he got hes own agenda behind it.
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