Prologue. "That's my sister!"
Oct 09, 2021
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I know there's a ton of new characters already. Don't worry - you don't have to remember all of them to understand the story. I'm just dropping some foreshadowing. A lot of foreshadowing, actually.
Whether or not you liked this chapter, feel free to share your thoughts. I'm writing for fun, but I'd like to become better at it.
Thank you! (To be continued)
Top comment
Very interesting! Using Lorraine's point-of-view as a kid who is used to seemingly 'high-class' things yet still curious about fights and such was very well done.
The sudden changing of people who seemed important at first but discarded as unimportant by Lorraine and then suddenly turning into very relevant to the plot was nicely pulled off.
Also, nice sketches. The additions give a nice feel to the story and well-drawn too!
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