Escapade Chapter 1
Apr 06, 2020
From the following project, this is a one-shot graphic novel! if you see how the art style and quality have a lack of polish is because it was made by one man while being drawn. rest to sure that this project isn't final, this project was written and drawn by Brandon Scott Thomas [Brandon Station] himself. The real project is currently in the works and it'll be completely different then what you are seeing right now.
This project is copyrighted by Brandon Station ©2020 - All rights reserved
This One-Shot Graphic Novel is possibly not meant for kids who are under the age of 13, If you are 13 and/or over feel free to proceed!
AsianRiceWorker
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First impressions I like it. Although I personally am not fond of the design of the character (just a personal taste), I do see the potential in this. I think you shouldn't add the "slightly amazed" and try the approach of wider eyes with a glow/sparkle to them. I could be wrong but I think you're not confident in how you draw some motions, for example you put "falls". I think adding "sound effects" works better. Also the one panel where the guy trips is great. I like the shift of art style where it better expresses the tone and quality of this one shot. Shading isn't too bad either. Some creators have difficult pinpointing the light but you don't seem to have that issue. I also like the third to last panel where the ears come out. Overall, could use some work but SUPER good. I see the potential and keep up great art!
(P.S. If I misspell anything Imma just pretend English isn't my first language...)
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