For the fourth time, Donnie is entering Middle School. Troubled, and wishing to better himself, he meets AJ, a new student, and his newly discovered next-door neighbor, whom he attempts to help with her own troubles.
This is pretty good so far! I like the art style and the Jerry segment. I also feel kinda bad for Donnie. He doesn't seem insane, just misguided; but AJ on the other hand... lol. Something I noticed, sometimes the text was a little blurry and tough to read when the font size was decreased to fit the bubbles—not terribly so, just a little bit for me personally. Other than that, keep up the good work!
Donnie is a psychopathic kid who's been trying to escape his destructive downfall. Having to choose whether to keep trying to better himself, or take the easy way out and go full-on violent on his country's twisted, and backwards people. For now, he's taking advice from different entities, whether it's his plush toy Libby, his psychotic neighbor AJ, or a masked 'dream' figure known as The Masked Stalkee.
END STRIP: Immortal brain gerbil Jerry is an escaped lab experiment wandering the sands of the Sahara desert; looking for the brains of idiots to either feed on, or make smart again.
MAIN CHARACTERS: Donnie, AJ, Libby, The Masked Stalkee, Lucy, Bobby.
Written & Illustrated by Brandon Luke.
*NOTICE - Donnie the Fighting Psychopath contains coarse language and depictions of graphic violence and torture, both physical and psychological, ranging from mild to severe. Viewer discretion is advised.
*Donnie the Fighting Psychopath and all related characters with in are copyrighted by author Brandon Tenn Luke.
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