Good worldbuilding tho I will say I'm not a fan of having an expo dump of the lore at the very beginning, you should find a more organic way to introduce the world into the story, good job :D
NEW RAW UNCUT VERSION WILL BE COMING SOON TO MY WEBSITE. WWW.ALKALISALT.COM
WITH MORE CHAPTERS, MORE INTENSE SCENES.
Since the Neanderthals, we haven't really done much for " evolution " . Until 2103, when scientists started to discover people with healing powers. Their hands and eyes would glow blue or gray. This new species was named the Syckels. But in 2234 war ended the peace. Syckels were gathered and shot on sight. Gov. Larkin wanted all of them to be eliminated. This is Iva's story.
(As the story progresses the more colorful the comic becomes)
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