Moonage Daydream | Chapter I
Feb 24, 2018
We are introduced to Cozmata and her family.
Cozmata makes a bad decision.
Aanchal Budhiraja
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Hey! The first chapter has great characterization. We see different facets of the protagonist! She's very likable with her curious and a bit rebellious personality. And I like your art style! It's fun and engaging.
Although, as a reader, I would like it if the same font style and size were used throughout. Different font styles can add more dimension to the character but it would be better to use it sparingly or for a single unique character.
Some panels (with the customer) seemed to be repeated as well. I don't know if there was a reason behind that.
That said, the chapter progressed nicely and ended on a hook! So it immediately wants me to read the next one :)
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