Hey guys! Here are the initial roughs I did for the first chapter. What I did for the first chapter was to do it in all one go.
At first, Fight Me! was supposed to be only maybe about two chapters long. :P But then I expanded it quite a bit.
-As you can see, some of the dialogue was changed drastically. Yosuke's character was actually two different people. A guy she fought and the Student President who demanded she drop out of the school for getting into too many fights.
-I thought that this didn't make any sense and combined the characters so he could come back in chapter two to wrap up the story.
-The reason I didn't have any names in this draft was because I named Mimi and Yosuke at the very last second lol
-Fun Fact: Yosuke's character is based on the many terrible love interests that pop up in shojo manga. His current characterization is how I imagine these guys would end up in real life.
-Mimi was originally going to have just three sisters, and live with her parents. In the current version, she has seven sisters and they were all raised by their maternal grandfather. Where are their parents? Umm...it's best not to know for now . The story I have for them would make Fight Me! turn into a completely different genre (more like psychological horror) if I explored where they are within the current storyline. So it's going to a side story.
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