I know a lot of people are giving conflicting advice about the bit of dialogue. If you want her to speak "properly" or not casually/slang-like, it would be "Why the fuck do you have wings?". If you would rather her speak slang-ish (the best way I can describe it really) or casually/improper you could keep it "Why the fuck you have wings?" or replace have with "got". It's complicated but "got" gives it a different mood/tone. It's hard for me to explain and I know it must be terribly confusing to a non-native speaker.
Rafael, an angel, bored of his life in heaven and jealous of humans freedom, decides to run away to the earth, only to end disappointed and half transformed into a demon.
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