Love the dialogue between them here - it flows so naturally and I found myself laughing at the subtle humor. Great job with the story so far, too - it's easy to understand and I find myself wanting to read on!
Ollie's summer plans involved doing boring adult things ; sort through her recently deceased father's possessions and properties , go over highly boring (but insanely important) paperwork, redirect nosy neighbors' handsy paws off her lawn and yadda yadda yadda. But things take a turn for the bizzare when she gets thrown in the middle of a ritual to resurrect a crazy old lady's dead son and suddenly, Ollie's summer becomes everything but boring.
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