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Eryuel: The Mine of Nakir

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Alan Djayce

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So, it's ended.

This was a one-shot to see if was able to finish something of the sort.

It seems i am, even if not a particulary good or decent one.

I mean, you can feel the moment i stopped caring about the history and just wanted to hush to the end.

"hush" being a measure of quality and not quantity because god knows it took forever for me to do this last page.

I think the reason behind that was that i realized this would feel more like a prelude to a history than a self contained thing.

Now i see it would be better to have Elen and Nari lose the whole thing with Ael, that scapes into the sunset and them having to be contempt with a half victory over the ogre.

Good god that would be a better ending.

And i would probably be able to do it in fewer pages.

Well, it seems i am actually making some progress as a storyteller after all.

Keep tuned for more commonplaace but maybe, eventually, good stuff by me.

Thanks for reading!

#magic #lazy #Comic #dnd #grass

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Eryuel: The Mine of Nakir

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After six people go missing on a long-closed mine, a mage and a sword for hire are tasked with the mission of finding them.

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