You know what could work better, instead of stopping the story to explain something? Is if you made a page before the chapter explaining it, so when it comes around, the reader is ready for it and the story doesn't pause for a second.
Acroalis is a fantasy world in which everyone has been living peacefully. that is, until two meteors landed.
the people of Acroalis ignored them, thinking them of a normal phenomena, but little do they know the meteors
contained a powerful source. one that will change all of Acroalis
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