An unfamiliar scent fills my nose not like the milky nursery scent I am used to and cold surrounds me. I feel sharp jaws are holding me by the scruff and fluffy white stuff is blowing all around me. And then cold wet stuff starts coming to and then I hear a big boom and my my eyes shoot open. More booms strike and I’m horrified. It's dark out and snowy cold wind swirls around me. My toes feel numb and finally the wolf carrying me stops by a river and then leans down and drops me into the water!

Everything turns black then the current pulls me onto an iceberg and the storm slowly dies down I start yelping for help and the next thing I know little Monark comes in and scoops me up by the scruff. Ever since then we were the bestest of friends and now we're mates! For a while I spent all my time trying to find my lost family but then after hours of work I finally just give up and learn to live with it.

I come back to the den with a raven black rabbit in my jaws, I drop it to the dirt of the den floor. “The River is rising” I say. “Oh no” Monark murmurs more to herself than me. “Whats wrong?” I say without waiting for an answer. “Isn’t it a good thing there will be much more fish.” “What me?!” Monark says “worrying I’m not worried!” You sure do Look worried I thought to myself. “Monark are you sure you're ok?” “Oh I’m fine”. “Let's go hunting” I say “we can teach the pups to hunt today.” “today?!” Frisk says bouncing up and down. “Yes today” I say. I suddenly start to feel bad for Frisk she’ll never be a full wolf she's blind. But I’ll try my hardest to train Frisk. “ I’ll take Frisk you take Barley and River.” I say. “Ok” Monark said “sounds like a plan”. “Frisk come with me” I say “ we're going to hunt by the clearing.” “ok!” Frisk says excitedly.

The wind blew against my face as I walked slowly to the training clearing. “Can we run?” Frisk asked. I had been taking a slow pace because Frisk was blind but I didn't think of it getting on his nerves. “Um ok” I say “are y-you sure you are bl-” I stop myself in the middle of my words but it's too late. At first he looks offended but then his expression softens. “Dad, why don’t we run but we should still warn me for trees” he says “it's ok I’m blind that's all” surprised by Frisks maturity I say “o-ok.” I start to run and he follows its as if he's a normal pup.

A gust of wind blows onto my face as Frisk and I arrive at the clearing. Frisk says nothing but I can sense he's excited. “Now what do you smell?” I say. He tilts his head up and sniffs “rabbit” he says “Follow the scent” I say he follows the strong rabbit stench to a hole “it goes down so the rabbit must be in the hole” he says “yes!” I whisper excitedly he’s getting the hang of it. “Now crouch and when you start to smell the rabbit rising pounce, and be quick so it doesn't have time to think.” I whisper “Okay” he says crouching down. And then before I know it the rabbit comes up and Frisk confidently pounces. I can feel his happiness. “Good job!” I say “ you did it on the first try” He looks ever so happy “now bury it I’m gonna give you a patrol around the territory” I tell him. “ok!” he says.

The wind blows in my face as I run back after the training mission I’m satisfied and I can tell Frisk is to as he runs by my side. I happily sprint to the den. “You Took long enough” Monarch said as we walk in the den as sun sets. “Yes” I say “but it was worth it we caught all the pray in the forest” I say with a playful light in my eyes. I drop the fresh kill in a pill in the middle of our den as Frisk washes himself. “Frisk come and get some fresh kill” Monarch said. “Ok” Frisk muttered. I lean down and grab a piece of fresh kill from the pile. “ I’ve never had fresh kill before” Frisk says “Barley wanna share with me?” “of course” Barely says. “ the water level is rising” I say to Monarch “I can’t wait to see how many fish there are tomorrow!” I say excitedly “oh” Monarch said “cool.” Monarch looks terrified. Why does the water level scare Monarch so much I thought to myself. “G’night pups” I said “G’night Monarch” I snuggle deeper into the leaves in the den I fall asleep in deep thought.

Future Maya Comments-

 An unfamiliar scent fills my nose not like the milky nursery scent I am used to and cold surrounds me. I feel sharp jaws are holding me by the scruff and fluffy white stuff is blowing all around me. And then cold wet stuff starts coming to and then I hear a big boom and my my eyes shoot open. 

This sounds like a ultra smart 5 year old is trying to explain a thunder storm to an adult while sounding sophisticated.

My toes feel numb and finally the wolf carrying me stops by a river and then leans down and drops me into the water!

The way this is said makes this situation sound like the same 5 year old is saying that he enjoyed his trip to disney world but was very scared and excited on the fun water slide surprise ride. 

Anyway I'm tired. This took way too long for what it is. 

Bye!

-Maya