Exam 9: Results
Sep 03, 2017
samsonadejoh
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First off, let me just say that I think this series is dope! I like the ideas and the art style, its great to see how an artist improves from his first panel to his present. Now I am not any kind of art critic or professional at the craft but i defo think that you could expand your panels more to tell the story even better i.e more panels to show off what the characters are doing, cuz at the moment it seems to be a bit jumpy to me anyway. I say this because you have very interesting characters here, so it would benefit them to get more exposure (you know? like more screen time). I know you use this as practice, and you will defo improve more, I just though to share my opinion. Nice Work!!
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