Chapter 1: Page 6
Jul 04, 2017
SWORD FIGHT!
The beginning of the first big action scene in the comic. Incase anyone was wondering that “KAPOW!” is definitely homage to the great 1960’s Batman, starring the late Adam West. I had been wrestling with what sound effect to write for Duglas’s blow to Enzo, going through about three of four different options. None of them seemed to fit right. So in the end I just decided to go with a pop culture reference, whether someone gets it or not.
I really do love this page. The layout ended up being very strong and dynamic, and I’m super happy with how the first panel turned out. This page really gets the action of the comic off on the right foot. It only gets bigger and better from here though folks!
So what do you think? Disagree with any of my thoughts on this page? Agree with any of them? Leave a comment below and let me know!!
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I only know the word mutton wich is a tipe of food but what is shunter?
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