The anatomy is a little wonky, but that can easily be fixed by using references. And the background looks a bit weird, like it's kind of blurry/unnatural and difficult to focus on (unless that was intended). If you have solid outlines and colors for the background and use references for the people, I think it would help your art look a lot better. Keep up the great work!
Rosa is a detective from Las Vegas and finds her way into another world, with completely different rules of reality. Or are they? Rosa actually doesn't see a difference except for the people of the world being confused by what she sees as normal, everyday occurrences. So what's happening? Will she manage to figure it out? And will she get home?
What would you do if the laws of reality stopped working the way you expected them to? Would you be mad? Confused? Scared? Or would you try to figure out what's going on? Maybe work it to your advantage?
Comic updates every Monday.
What to expect:
World hopping
Rule breaking
Violence (when appropriate)
Minor sexuality
Evolving art
Lazy or non-existent backgrounds
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