Monster p.8
Sep 25, 2016
Where's the light?
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Thanks to Attru67 for corrections.
J. Lovelace
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Hmm about the text. Sometimes it sounds really strange. Maybe you need to ask your english speaking friends to help you?
I studied to become a translator, so I totally understand where your small grammar errors come from. You stick to your native language too much, and English has a different flow and it's own rules XD Sometimes you have to make a sentence that sounds different in your language, but the meaning of it stays the same, if you know what I mean.
I tried to translate some comics before and trust me, it's SUPER HARD, so don't worry about your mistakes. You do as best as you can right now, but if you want to do much better, I suggest you find yourself a proofreader that would help with the translation.
I can try to help you a bit too, when I have time ovo/
I'm not an expert in English either, but I'll try my best.
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