I'm going to start by saying I like your use of color and shading. Your art is good enough for me to be jealous of. But your dialogue could use a little work. Grammar aside, there's some inconsistency with profanity and your overall tone seems a little simplistic.
Codename Bathala chronicles the adventure of Captain Michael Divinahustisya as the armored adventurer Bathala. Superhero action in a fictional Asian city.
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