HUMOR AND STORYLINES.

Here we are, okay let’s start:

Coin Rush uses various types of humor: Ranging from situational humor, dark humor, cutaways, wordplay, satirical humor, toilet humor, and also Slapstick humor. The humor sometimes is blue. And also has forms of self-depreciating humor.

One example of humor is here:

Cheesy: Hey Cheeseburger, you got your baseball hat?

Cheeseburger: Nope, I have not! What should I use?

Cheesy: Maybe you can use a cooking stick?

Cheeseburger: You have really smoked, have you? How can you use a cooking stick when playing baseball!?

Cheesy: I don’t know, why do you use a screwdriver instead of hammers sometimes?

Cheeseburger: Because it’s faster, not some Drake fan who hasn’t explored the world watching his skin for 3 hours.

Cheesy: And plus, your toilet really has broken down whilst doing that.

Cheeseburger: Okay, shut up, as if your cheese-nuts has been explored.

Cheesy: Find a baseball, quick!

Cheeseburger: I think I will use you.

Cutaway

Cheeseburger flings Cheesy on the ball, and his eye keeps getting hurt.

Cheesy: Call…Saul.

Yeah that’s how the humor is like, you can describe it yourself.

I make the jokes using my brain, everyday life, and plus I go to school, I watch my friends, and write anything funny. I think of a funny response. I mean I’m like a comedian I can tell you a dark joke.

Stories tempt from the dysfunctional gang running hotel pizza, they go on all sorts of adventures, Season 2 will explore this for you.

And also, some are inspired from many movies and sitcoms, episode names as well.

And Coin Rush isn’t just comedy-first, it has heart and emotional depth, it explores lots of themes your teens go through.

When making a story, use your mind and heart, and plan carefully, the risks, and don’t do for the sake of views. Do for the sake of loving your skill and exploring it: This is Wattpad, and when I say ‘’Wattpad’’ I hate billionaire stories and other stuff, like, this is what your teens love? I’m not discouraging you lol.

But do what you love, okay forget what I said, here is the dark joke.

They are campers sitting on the fire, one says:

‘’Hey where is the food?’’

The other camper says:

‘’I have food!’’

The camper asks:

‘’Where?’’

Then he shoves him in the fire.

‘’We will eat his skin.’’

Now next is…. what else have I not discussed? Comment down below!

Next is: Inspirations.

My biggest inspirations are: SMG4.

Really, this guy makes machinima on GMOD, his stories are funny and interesting, although it declined in Season 14, and I don’t watch it, and maybe…maybe Season 15 Is dumpster. It will still inspire many people.

Also: Family Guy: Seth Macfarlane.

Really, Coin Rush contains humor from Seth’s cartoons. The frequent use of cutaways are in Coin Rush, and Cheesy is like Peter, and Creamweet is like Lois.

Also: The Simpsons and Futurama (Matt Groening)

Really, idk what to say, but the Simpsons started and made a cartoon for adults be possible, dark humor be possible, and that’s why.

Plus, Futurama’s humor had the biggest inspiration on Coin Rush, biggest! It made it have dark humor and other sources.

Also: SpongeBob and Tom and Jerry.

The Slapstick does, a lot of it helps.

And I watch Netflix every Saturday nights, I see lots of movies and cartoons, I can’t say much but: That Christmas is an amazing animated movie, you should watch it, it’s highly entertaining. I watched it last year in December, took a nice holiday trip that refreshed my batteries.

And Sonic Prime, I love it, it’s an amazing nicely-animated shows.

Also: DS123!

Listen shoutout to @DS123 on Wattpad, that guy made me inspire how the dialogue in Coin Rush should be made, idk what to say, but I love his stories, the drama, the chapters, every month, he posts a story, I tune in to read.

And I haven’t, but I’m going to say a shout-out message on his wall.

And THX you all Wattpaders!

Your stories are amazing and have inspired Coin Rush really, to the people who are following me, I’ll follow back, I love most of your stories.

Next: Is the end.

Tune in.

Thanks for reading my story, and thanks for taking time to listen and read this, I love sharing this with you, and writing is my passion, whether it’s failure in life, whether people treat you bad, show this in writing, a lot of people really connect, and also continue making amazing stories and keeping your readers happy and consistent.

What I learnt the other weeks is: Date and Time for publish isn’t important, and there is no best time, thanks for that redditor who told me.

No need to respond, but thanks for that.

And let’s not end this amazing story yet, Let’s end it with a bang.

SNEAK PEAK:

Cheesy: Were going to Italy!

Everyone: What?

Cheesy: I decided I have too much money so we're going to Italy, it's a very nice place!

Creamsweet: Cheesy you've gone too far!

Cheesy: This will be amazing, I'll buy everyone kfc ice cream!

Mr. Corn Flakes Boy: Yaaay!

Fireslayer: I want beer!

Cheesy: Well, I want you to SHUT up

Cheeseburger: Look Cheesy, you did it *whispers* At least those gameshow idiots won't find you now....

Cheesy: Yeah...

Tiffany: If we're going to Italy, I'm having an Italian cosplay!

Fireslayer: Me and Corn Flakes Boy are gonna make a new Italian show, right Corn Flakes Boy?

Mr. Corn Flakes Boy: What?

Fireslayer: We will make a new show in Italy, it will be Totally nuts!

Mr. Corn Flakes Boy: Ooh, all about nuts?!

Fireslayer: No, its nuts....

Cheesy: All right, I’ve already got our tickets, let's go!

Creamsweet: But Cheesy, if the plane crashes and we don't have a pleasant experience, I'm blaming you, and I'll tell the manager to fire you!

Cheesy: *gulp* Don't worry it will be pleasant!

Fireslayer: Hey! Wanna see a skit for one of the new shows totally nuts?

Cheesy: What?

Jillian: That's it, you two out!

Cheeseburger: Jillian, you can't just send them out like-

Jillian: They are ruining the moment!

Cheesy: But Jilli, they are two doofuses, and I know you are tired to manage them, but they are fun!

Creamsweet: Yeah....

Jillian: *angry, shouts* I DONT CARE OF YOUR STUPID GROUP, JUST YOU TWO OUT!

Fireslayer: You know what, agreed?! I'm out of this stinking spaghetti place! Mr. Corn Flakes Boy let's get out of this stupid place!

Mr. Corn Flakes Boy: *he stands up* I'm out....

Fireslayer: Let's go and make Totally Nuts Together!

*they leave*

Cheesy: *whispers to cheeseburger* What's wrong with your cousin?

Cheeseburger: She’s Um-She has has a behavior disorder, so yeah...

Cheesy: *whispers* So that explains it all...

Tiffany: What are you two saying about Jillian?

Cheeseburger: *whispers* She has a behavior disorder....

Jillian: Alright everyone let's eat!

Don Raviolio: (calm but commanding) "Ah, my unexpected guests. Welcome to Casa Raviolio."

Cheesy: (grinning) "Casa Raviolio? Sounds like a fancy restaurant!"

Don Raviolio: (raising an eyebrow) "You must be the brave—or foolish—group who thought it wise to disturb my... private quarters."

Cheeseburger: (nervously) "Uh, yeah... sorry about that, Mr. Ravioli Guy."

Don Raviolio: (sternly) "It’s Don Raviolio. And what brings a group of lost souls to my mansion on such a stormy night?"

Creamsweet: (trying to charm) Oh, we were just passing by, and... uh, we thought this was, um, a hotel?

Don Raviolio: (chuckling) A hotel, you say? Funny... most hotels don’t come with guards.

The gnocchi bodyguards step forward menacingly, their arms crossed like doughy boulders.

Tiffany: Okay, okay! We’re lost, alright? We didn’t mean to intrude.

Don Raviolio: (leaning in, inspecting them closely) Lost, eh? Perhaps you were looking for something... more valuable? A treasure, maybe?

Cheesy: (excitedly) Yes! Exactly! You see, we have this map—

Cheeseburger: (elbowing Cheesy) Shut it, Cheese-for-brains!

Don Raviolio: (his eyes narrowing) A map, you say? Very interesting...

Creamsweet: (nervously laughing) Oh, he’s just joking! Right, Cheesy? Just a big jokester!

Don Raviolio: (smirking) Well, jokesters or not, you’re in my house now. And nobody leaves Casa Raviolio without... settling their bill.

Don Raviolio: (ignoring him) You see, there’s a... small problem that I, Don Raviolio, cannot attend to personally. A rival family has been causing disruptions to my... pasta empire.

Cheesy: (excitedly) Is it spaghetti ninjas?! I always wanted to fight spaghetti ninjas!

Don Raviolio: (sternly) No. It’s... the Breadstick Brotherhood.

The room falls silent. The gang exchanges confused glances.

Tiffany: "The... Breadstick Brotherhood? Sounds like a bakery club."

Don Raviolio: (frowning) "Do not mock them. They are ruthless. They control the bread supply of this town, and without breadsticks, my ravioli empire suffers. No bread, no customers.

Creamsweet: And what exactly do you want us to do about it?

Don Raviolio: Simple. I need you to infiltrate their bakery, retrieve the secret recipe for their garlic butter glaze, and bring it back to me. With that, I can create my own breadsticks and reclaim my rightful place as the king of Italian cuisine.

Cheesy: (excited) Sounds like a heist! I’m in!

Cheeseburger: (in disbelief) "Are you insane?! You want us to risk our lives for... breadsticks?"

Don Raviolio: (leaning closer, his tone dark) Not just breadsticks. Power. Respect. And, of course... your freedom.

The gnocchi guards crack their knuckles, emphasizing the stakes.

Rita: (sarcastically) Oh, great. Blackmailed by a talking ravioli. This day keeps getting better.

Don Raviolio: (smirking) "Do this for me, and I’ll ensure your safe passage out of Italy. Refuse... and, well, let’s just say the lasagna carpet is always ready to roll out."

The gang looks at each other, realizing they have no choice.

Cheesy: (grinning) Alright, gang. Let’s pull off the greatest breadstick heist Italy has ever seen!

Cheeseburger: *shooting* That's all of them!

Cheesy: Yeah, all of them, let's get out of here with the recipe!

They then run...

Cheesy: Tiffany, Rita, Creamsweet, let's get out of here we got the recipe!

Creamsweet: Finally, I was gonna try meth for a second there...

Rita: Excuse me...you want to be on drugs?

Tiffany then comes out crying

Tiffany: I give up my Only Fans career! You were right it was stupid!

Cheesy: Stupid Indeed...

Cheeseburger: Why do you smell like a penis, and blush, and sweat?

Tiffany: I was rizzing the guard up, and then we went too far...

Cheesy: Ta!

Creamsweet: Alright, let's go!

Cheesy: Don...?

Don Ravilio: That's me....and yes....it was a trap I set up!

Cheesy: This is no way to forgive your heroes?

Don Ravilio: HEROS?! You mean Heros that let the Goochi gang know about me?!

Cheeseburger: So, your arguing over a stupid recipe?!

Don Ravilio: Can you shut up!? You weren't supposed to be talking, just sneaking quietly!

Creamsweet: Then why didn't you do it yourself!?

Don Ravilio: No one does anything for me! I send people, and I kill them!

Everyone: What?!

Don Ravilio: Yes...you heard me *whips hosepipe*

Cheesy: Ow....You. gonna kill us?

Don Ravilio: You think I'm kind.... *laughs bitterly* Just wait and see!

Cheesy: *sigh* Yes...Yes....Yes, I did. I just wanted to make the hotel rich and all, I got tired of living poor and us not working enough in the hotel, the profit was low, and I am the boss and I wanted to make everyone happy, and I wanted us to have fun even though we are poor, I wanted us to have a nice life, to go on a vacation, and I just came here to run for the game-show crew, then we find a mafia boss....I'm sorry, this is all my fault...I'm such an idiot...I’m a stupid brother, a failed manager of the hotel, Cheeseburger is right, all of you are right about me, who am I? A nobody....

Don Raviolio roars...

Don Raviolio: Not so fast, you’re not going anywhere!

Everyone turns to him.

Cheesy: Oh, crap, not again!

Don Raviolio: So, come back before things get dangerous!

STAY TUNED THIS MAY…

COIN RUSH SERIES 2: FROM VENICE TO BENICE!

PREMIERS MAY 2, 2025, 8:00 PM

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