Thanks for reading!
I'm making an effort to improve the art and on the other hand to study more English idioms, I haven't been able to correct those aspects of the language yet, but when I learn more I will edit the chapters to correct things in the language.
And remember that in the future, when I finish the webtoon I will proceed to edit it to correct and improve several aspects that nowadays bother me but I don't have time to change haha.
Personally in this chapter I liked playing with Louis' anxiety, on the outside he looks like a guy who knows everything, and can do anything, but inside he is very insecure, and he will be even more insecure when he starts to really connect with Zack, super intense haha.
On Patreon they have extra scenes from the Louis, but I didn't put it here because it's not entirely relevant.
Please do not hesitate to ask me if you do not understand something, I will be happy to clarify your doubts.
Zackiel Farrel after a miserable debt left by his adoptive father, and after leaving the military paying the consequences of 3 years of arrest, gets out of prison with the help of his high school friend who also offers him a tempting job as a bodyguard and an almost millionaire salary (all very suspicious), but with it he would have the opportunity to pay his debts quickly and leave the country. He doesn't think much about it and accepts. A few days later he finds himself involved in a more complicated situation than that of being a simple bodyguard when he meets Louis, the youngest son of the judge who hired him and his turbulent night life marked by revenge and betrayal. But what worries him the most is surviving the boy's twisted and sessual personality.
**** WARNINGS:
----Story with characters with a lot of age difference. If you are sensitive to it please do not read.
----Verbal and physical violence will be used, if you are sensitive to it please do not read.
----Almost explicit sexual content, I would make it explicit but the platform bans me. If you are sensitive to it do not read.
----It deals with sensitive issues such as drugs, corruption and violence of various kinds, but not between the protagonists xD I do not like to mistreat them too much, but the environment around them. It's a story with police and mafia overtones, if you're bored with that topic, it's not for you.
----Of course, it's a BOYSLOVE-YAOI-CHICOxCHICO story, if you don't like this genre please don't read.
----I'm a lady with a tangled lifestyle and I don't make a living from this, so updates will be whenever I can. I appreciate the patience and interest despite all that said.
Starts off ugly and I think it gets better after a couple of chapters. Slow development but it does pick up.
It would help me a lot if you liked it if you would share it. It's my first project so once it's finished I will do a revision and correct parts.
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