I made this warning because I received feedback (a bit unconstructive) from a reader saying that my writing in English was horrible. The person quoted some sentences, but he didn't say what was wrong with them or suggest a better expression. Which left me quite confused...
I always try to study different expressions to apply to my story. In the original version, I avoided using colloquialisms as much as possible to avoid this.
Jonathan is a promising young researcher aspiring for adventure and his own scientific discoveries. When his future seems uncertain, a unique opportunity arises and he decides to embark on a risky journey alongside people he doesn't know if he can trust. Jonathan meets Ezekiel and his military team extremely prepared for an expedition to the unexplored continent, as well as Eliza, a skilled and mysterious young woman who will help him on his way.
In a world similar to ours, but different, where the large and stormy seas separate the inhospitable lands, which in turn are unknown to each other and present hostility whether in their accommodation or in their residents. Jonathan has always dreamed since he was a child of becoming an explorer, the one who will look for answers that no one has. This leads him to the knowledge of the existence of a legend, the Genke tribe. A mystical civilization that fought alongside animals and possessed powers granted by the gods. They overthrew all invasions on their lands making their existence more feared than the deep forest itself located on an unexplored and distant continent.
Jonathan knows that there are hidden truths in history and getting to them is just the first step in his goal as an explorer and researcher. However, your decisions will have consequences and your resilience and perseverance will be tested to the limit. This journey will take Jonathan on an endless path where he will need to face the reality around him while exploring the ends of the earth.
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