Here's another short story. This time the setting is a gloomy futuristic world. In this manga I decided that only the characters are traditionally drawn, the rest is painted digitally.
I'm no expert but i don't think it panel 6, page 6 needed the text. the strong artwork pretty much tells the reader that, and having a box of text in front of it kinda make the panel less powerful. Just my thoughts.
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