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Mar 31, 2016
So, Voiletta and Raquel sadly apologizes to the teacher (Mrs. Passmore). And, Mrs. Passmore forgives them...but...for now...she want both of the girls (Voiletta and Raquel)to be on time as well as the others too. After that... Mrs. Passmore was glad to get started on the Art Class lessons. So, she drew some objects/shapes like a triangle,circle, and a rectangle as an example. Next page will show the class mate drawing or figuring out what to draw.
SO STAY TUNED TO THE NEXT FRIENDS FOR LIFE COMIC PAGE.^^
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At first I thought it said Miss Paramore. Anyhow, the text can be hard to read at times. I highly recommend using dialogue balloons in the future. Also, I understand that this is probably your first ever comic, but practicing basic anatomy over time will most certainly help you as an artist. I will say the colors are decent give or take. I hope this isn't too harsh a review for you and that you produce more comics in the future :)
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Friends For Life is originally just about my OCs. The main characters, Violetta and Raquel. They'll will be more characters. Anyways, this Manga is a more like a friendship type. Like a bit of comedy, adventure, or probably romance. The plots in this manga are school, streets, stores, or whoever's house. That's basically it
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