Stepping out of the bathroom, Emily and Indigo saw absolute chaos. Broken glass and flipped tables, people fleeing the cafe, and police alarms in the distance. Emily nervously looked at Indigo. "W-what do we do?" she squeaked. Indigo smirked, saying, "I'd tell you, but you'd smack me." Emily angrily responded, "I'll smack you if you don't tell mes!" Giggling, Indigo said, "I don't know what we're gonna do." As she expected, Emily slapped Indigo. "Told you," whispered Indigo. Emily looked around, motioning Indigo to follow her. "Aren't you supposed to follow me?" confusedly asked Indigo. She rolled her eyes, saying "Whatever..." while following Emily. Indigo grabbed Emily's arm, flopping behind a table. "What the hell?" asked Emily. Indigo put her finger to Emily's mouth, whispering "I hear someone, so shut up!" As she said that, two people came out of a door in the back of the cafe. One of them started to speak to the other, and Indigo heard their voices, she found out they were women. "I think we did good, no?" asked one of the women. "Yup! No one's getting out of this one alive," giggled the other woman. The other woman asked, "Keiko, do you have no remorse?" The woman giggled, saying "Uh, no! Don't you know me?" Indigo whispered, "Keiko? Wait... Keiko!" Suddenly, Indigo jumped up and immediately got two guns and a morning star pointed right at her face. But as the two women looked at her, a creepy smile formed on Keiko's face. "Indigo!" she joyously squeaked. The other woman stared confusedly at Keiko, asking "You know this chick?" She looked back at the other woman, saying "Duh! It's Indigo, only the best girl we have, and also my best friend!" Keiko looked back at Indigo, saying "Anywho, this is my friend Rose. She's from the France Division, hence her being here." Indigo waved at Rose, and she waved back. Keiko pouted and looked around, saying "Indigo, I'm bored! Let's go kill people!" Indigo patted her head, saying "Now, now. We have a mission. Oh, wait. Emily!" At this moment, Emily hopped out from behind the table. "I swear, you guys are gonna be the death of me," Rose mumbled. "It's our funeral..." Emily responded.
Hey! I don't have much experience writing characters of Japanese descent, so if anyone has any recommendations or nitpicks, I'm happy to hear them! I love a cheeky bit of constructive criticism. Also, we have two new girls! Rose Denaeux and Keiko Agawa. Do we want a romantic side plot between these two?
A young Korean girl moves to Japan with her family, only to be kidnapped and trained to kill by the Yakuza. She is brought to France to kill a famous mafia boss, named Louis Bernard. But when she arrives in France and meets him, a romantic rivalry is formed between him and an old friend of Indigo's. Will she choose to go with the rich but dangerous mafia boss or the poor but kind old friend? Find out in the tale of Indigo.
Thank you to my mother and my friend Ella for encouraging my writing.
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