looking good, alot of panels on the pages. I would suggest lowering the count for your panels per page, this is from my own experience. Im not saying you shouldnt keep the panels I would suggest just making an additional page in the future and spreading them out a bit. (just a little constructive criticism) loving the story so far.
NOTE: READ RIGHT TO LEFT!!!!!!
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Depressed since a young age, Kyouya has always been thinking about whether there is life after death. Kyouya meets a man who takes him to his company where things go downhill very fast.
After an unfortunate accident with trying to look at test clones, Kyouya meets a demon in which the demon grants him the power of a reaper, and also being immortal. Now becoming immortal, will Kyouya's life will change for the good, or for the bad?
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