I saw on the last page that you liked constructive criticism, so here i go ^^ I really like the feeling of the second panel; the view makes you feel really included in the conversation and I do believe that lack of background in the third helps the "sudden" feeling, but I think the panel might have been stronger in a full body view. With the way he's stomping, I think it would have added to it to see his legs. Appart from that, I really like your drawing style! And so far this comic is very funny XD i can't wait for more ^^
A webcomic by Fat Rolf about music. At what lengths would you go to destroy your most precious creation?
In the mid-1980's, Jason Mason is wrapped up in the underground world of the Chicago punk scene. Years after he gets his band, Eminent Scum, off the ground, Jason has the need for a new avenue to pursue his stifled creative energies... when he comes up with the fictional serial killer, Slim Piggy.
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