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Fast

A crushing weight,

Suffocating,

Choking.

Expectation.

Achievement.

Success.

Sometimes,

I wish it would all just

Stop.

Sometimes,

I wish it would all just

Wait.

Time is passing

Too fast,

For me.

Too fast.

Sometimes,

I wish it would all just...

Give me a chance.

I just need a break,

Before I break.

A shattering,

Wrenching,

Sickening...

Sense of failure.

Guilt.

Shame.

Embarrassment.

It's too much.

Everything is too much.

I just need more time.

I need more time.

fridge

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Err im not actually that sad i just listened to a track of music and thought eh ill write a poem

I love writing sad poems idk why it just feels like im getting all these emotions out there

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Elizabeth Kay (Eli)

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The way you wrote this poem is so fitting to its them because it really gets the “too much” in its words across. I don’t know how to explain it but I can just /feel/ the overwhelmed emotions pouring from this poem. Am I making sense? Probably not. I’m rambling now 😂

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just some (admittedly kinda sad) poems I've written just about,,,things in my life. I'm only putting them on here because I want to get my feelings out, and writing poetry helps, but now it's like I need to go the extra step and have them *out* there, if that makes sense.

feel like I should put content warnings on, for like. depression. sad thoughts. but none of the poems thus far are like oh I'm sad, it's about situations or whatever so it's ok

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