This is why poetry and grammar editing programs are my go-to's in writing... 

Soooooo, I re-read some of my prior chapters and winced a lot, so I'm going to fix them, and the new ones a bit more, I have also realized it's going to be hard to keep a solid update schedule on this one, I'm thinking I'm gonna let up the pressure on this one and update whenever I can but with no solid schedule simply because I'm going to have to update whenever the Grammar-Nazi that lives with me has time to edit the worst errors in my writing, I swear I will add the 2 new chapters I wrote in the next week or so thou!!! so be expecting those soon!

(and if this update has glaring errors its cause I only ran it through half of the many grammar editors on my browser, Lol) ---

update, The Grammar Nazi quit. Sorry it's been so long- But you're going to get this mostly unedited from now on-See you in a bit