Chapter Three: The Perfect Gift (Part Two)
Sep 21, 2021
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i said most of what i wanted to say in my previous description.
but then i again i always have more room for babbling.
~this chapter marks my first grawlix (that nice string of funny characters in place of an actual curse word).
~i keep forgetting that i aged down my characters for this version, and even though this is the 6th version of this book, all the stuff i'm publishing here is kind of raw. maybe when i'm halfway through i can go into "head honcho" editing mode and clear up discrepancies.
~this time i try having a reflexive scene? where jacquie thinks? instead of moving from setpeice to setpiece?
~did you know that Dirty Hands is secretly a jooj reference? brownie points to the first person in the comments to guess what it is...
~is it obvious that i used thesaurus.com to add the word moue but then also used thesaurusdotcom to add a context clue for the people who didn't want to be bothered and look up whatever that meant?
lastly, to the one person who's somehow managed to go through all of my content without dropping off: THANK YOUUU!!! I will be making more content (because if i don't all of my worldbuilding and minimal plotting will go crumbling into dust).
see y'all next update!
[will you remember?
the 21st night of september?]
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