please don't read any of the comments if you haven't read the actual thing yet!!!! don't want anyone to get influenced by other people >:)
hey my dears!! if you fancy leaving a comment, please do it here!! any thoughts about the story?? did you guess the thing about elise? did you work out who the murderer(s) was?
I knew something was up when the narrator never spoke and was never spoken to.
Nev this was amazing! I couldn't tell who the murderers were, but in the end, the twist was interesting, for sure.
Also thanks for teaching me you can send someone into cardiac arrest purposefully. Not that I'll ever use that but still-
Hshshshshhs my cat was next to me when I was reading this and he got up as soon as I finished it
A 72 year old woman has passed away and after her funeral, her family sits down to have a meal together. During this meal, suspicions arise that what may have at first seemed like a natural death via cardiac arrest, was actually murder.
So, who did it? The husband? The sister? The son? Another of the relatives present? Each of them has a motive, each of them gains something from the woman's death.
AKA murder mystery except there's a twist but you'll have to read it to find out what >:)
short story!! completed, 6.5k words
mature for swearing but also this is about murder gkjdfn
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