The story is interesting. I like your drawing style, I like to USE the cartoonish style too. In The first chapter I thinking a lot how can I tell my opinion. Cuz I think The orange colour for The letters it was not a good idea, the red or the black is better choice. When I see First The letters and The background seems like in one layer and not separate. It not good to the human eyes, cuz hard to read the text. I like this comic, and I wait for The next chapter.
The story takes places around Jaden, Amadis, Han, Zeva, Carterus on the planet of Lilyous. As they take on an ancient force known as the “Lords of Black” that has been on the planet since the dawn of man. They seek to unleash their plan to change thing for the people that live there forever.
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