From the jump I can notice the improvements. Everything's a lot sharper and cleaner. It seemed a little odd that you introduced how to become a senior but then you gave the students an orientation test. I was slightly confused at first. But anyway I'm excited to see how this turns out.
Creator: Mike Toney
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Three students enrolled in a special school intended to teach them how wield there inner self as weapon.
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