Prologo (3.4)
Jun 13, 2019
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hokkaidokitsune
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I think you should work on the way you script your comic pages. The story can be fun and the comic in general can be cute in occasions but I find it to be boring for the most part.
A good advice for content creators is to diagram their pages/scripts in such a way that the reader wants to turn the page (or scroll in this case) out of interest in the plot/characters, which I think is what you are missing here.
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