Your improving more and more ,especially the page with thad surrounded by his aura and the pheonix around the ship. But on a negative note, only cuz im a fan, you got 4 year olds and 3 year olds talking dialogue way beyond there years i feel like. Small children should be sounding like drunk idiots.
Gang members with supernatural strength and mysterious spiritual power.......They take what they want when they want and kill anyone who opposes them, Controlling whole cities under one law........The Weak die and the Strong survive. Join our Protagonist Jericho Joseph James, A 15 year old smart Ass Learning The Trade as he tries to survive in this new environment.
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