Loving the art style so far and creature designs! The page layout and speechbubble placement is a bit confusing at times, I'm having trouble figuring out if the comic reads from left-to-right or right-to-left at times (mostly page 4 and 9), as well as tell which bubble you're supposed to read first on the more text heavy pages (most page 4, 8 and 9). But other than that it's looking good!
An ordinary group of teens find themselves on a spectacular and dazzling adventure into the strange and bizarre land of Nisabor, a kingdom of Pangea on the planet Gwydr. Here they find themselves in control of their own destiny through what can only be described as magic. This series updates mondays.
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