SP Ch. 1 pg. 13
Mar 18, 2015
This is the end of the first chapter of Seishin Pātonā
Alunzuli
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Interesting first chapter, the plot seems promising as the characters. Zethero is kind of weird wanting to help someone so much but it doesn't make him bad, actually he seems a nice person.
I saw you were correcting some things between the pages as people also pointed out, so nothing else to say more than keep the good job, when I can I'll continue with the chapter 2 :)!
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