I had to redo pg 179 because it didn't match up with what page 178 set up.
Michele was angry on the final panel of pg 178, but then it kind of fizzles out on the beginning panel of pg 179 of the original version.
I wanted the burning of her hair to be a big deal, so I redid the top half of page 179. Still, it kind of violates the "no stacking" panels rule I was always taught (since it might lead to confusion for where the reader's eyes are supposed to go).
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